Writing 101 assingment 7

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I have fallin a bit behind on my writing 101 assignment. Due to needing to get my box reviews done and the kids going to birthday parties along with some school things but here is assignment 7

Write a post based on the contrast between two things — whether people, objects, emotions, places, or something else..Today’s twist: write your post in the form of a dialogue. You can create a strong opposition between the two speakers — a lovers’ quarrel or a fierce political debate, for example. Or you could aim to highlight the difference in tone and style between the two different speakers —your call!Today’s twist: write your post in the form of a dialogue. You can create a strong opposition between the two speakers — a lovers’ quarrel or a fierce political debate, for example. Or you could aim to highlight the difference in tone and style between the two different speakers — your call!

Scared and alone on a dark dark night. A bottle and I were having a fight. “your alone” it said I respond with I know,

“your afraid” it whispered I yelled “shut up”. Its temping but I must not its bad but what if its not this time.

It could be different this time. In the back of my mind I know better then that.

I pick up the bottle and throw it across the room and it shatters and whimpers “you hurt me”.

I raise my voice and say NO you have hurt me and this has been going on far to long.

I can not allow it anymore our relationship can not continue!

I try and walk out but then I stop and I start to think of all the fun we have had in the past.

The late night parties and the hang outs but then it comes back to me that it is poison and we have gotten into so much trouble too.

That’s when it is not there when I need it most and time is  when I need to feel and not just numb the pain.

I need help if I am going to move on. I walk into the arms of another and its name is sobriety.

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3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. laurabecknielsen
    Oct 01, 2014 @ 11:46:15

    Good first draft- have you ever heard Gogol Bordello’s “Alcohol” song? I think you’d dig it after writing this. You might even find it an artistic inspiration for your piece.

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  2. joyroses13
    Oct 01, 2014 @ 15:30:57

    Great job!!

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